Chapter 44. It's really a time for men to take more responsibility for raising children.

I've finished classes. The final exam was Monday, and I finished all the grades this morning. (See attached graph.) Here is a list of all of the thesis choices each student had, followed by the thesis statement present in the actual essay. Some students wrote essays that bore little relation to the choice of topics, and as 100 out of 400 points were for 'arguments supporting the thesis,' generally such students failed to score above 75%. Although I intended this as a 'cheater' filter to identify students who were copying from other sources or who had prepared an essay in advance for this open-book test, it seemed to catch good and bad students equally. Perhaps that means that many students I thought were 'good' are cheating? Anyway.

Best quotes from student papers:

The federal government can pour more money to school so as to improve the equipment used in classes. If one school has better equipment, then it will be easier to make better students. So I think as long as the government spend more money on school education, students will have a satisfying score. Anyway, money is essential. ... As to the saying that federal testing would be politicized, I think in every country it is similar. The country won't teach you what bad things your country has done.

Diet is a suffering, because, I had ever done it. You can not eat so many delicious food, especially chocolate. I like chocolate. During the diet, I'm not happy.

"Since the September 11 terrorist attacks on the United States, China's statements on its readiness to support the United States and the emerging interational coalition in the urgent tight against global terrorism have been mixed and accompanied by caveats." (David G. 2001). From this information, we can know that China's support for the United States on terrorism is sincere.

Both people in mainland and in Taiwan has the same ties of blood. When we see the peaceful offensive lose efficacy, we agree our government to use force to make our compatriots come back the embrace of our motherland. As we know that our compatriots lives bad lives under the Taiwan government.

Here are the thesis choices (written by me, based on the research each student presented on a topic of their choice) and, immediately after each list of choices, what the student wrote. Text is transcribed verbatim, especially the ever-popular space-before-the-comma.

Federal Involvement in American Education is a Good Idea Federal Involvement in American Education is a Bad Idea American Students are Getting Dumber American Students are Getting Smarter

I think the Federal fovernment should play a role in school education.

Women in poor countries have fewer rights than women in rich countries. It is unethical to deny women equal rights The world would be better if women had equal rights Women in China do not have equal rights The fight for womens' rights is not consistent around the world

If women had equal rights , I think that the world would be better.

Corruption can be solved by taking power away from government officials. Corruption cannot be solved by campaigns against corruption. * Corruption is universal. My opinion is that corruption cannot be solved by campaigns against corruption.

Automobiles are the best method of transportation Automobiles are not a good method of transportation Automobiles are more dangerous in China than in the United States

So, all the Chinese people should not be encouraged to buy a private car.

Part-time jobs should be banned for high school students It would be unfair to poor students to ban part-time jobs Colleges should provide part-time jobs for students It doesn't matter which part-time job a student has Students should first work full-time for a year, and then go to college

In order to solve this problem I think colleges should provide part-time jobs for students.

Students must have computers to learn effectively Students with computers learn more than students without computers Computers are not needed to learn Computers are more appropriate in college than in primary and secondary school The effect of computers in education has been disappointing

I'm sure that students with computers can learn more than students without computers.

China's drop in population growth was not caused by the one-child policy China should change to other methods of population control Family planning in China should have started 200 years ago Entering the WTO will help China's overpopulation problem

If the family planning in China have started 200 years ago , everything will changed.

Men and Women should live together before marriage China should not have a one-child policy People should not have children outside of marriage

So I think Men and Women should live together before marriage.

Educated women are happier than beautiful women Beautiful women are more successful than educated women Beauty contest winners are not credible sources

I think , nowadays, education is more impotant (sic) then beauty , educated people , especially the women are happier than beautiful women.

China isn't doing enough to prevent AIDS China is doing no better or worse than the rest of the world in fighting AIDS Corruption is a factor in the spread of AIDS in China

However, I think China isn't doing enough or good to prevent AIDS.

Physicians are not qualified to assist in deciding when euthanasia is apppropriate Support for euthanasia, by the 'quality of life' argument, implies support for abortions Euthanasia is never justified under any circumstances Euthanasia is primarily a political issue Euthanasia is primarily an ethical issue Euthanasia is not the same thing as assisted suicide or mercy killing.

However, to think euthanasia is never justified under any circumstances is irresponsible.

The Chinese government's response to AIDS is inadequate The Chinese government's response to AIDS is adequate AIDS is not discussed enough in China. AIDS in China will get worse before it gets better AIDS is a political topic

But the discussion about AIDS in China is not enough.

Consumer debt is a means for the rich to exploit the poor Consumer debt is not a problem China should avoid developing too much consumer debt

China should avoid developing too much consumer debt.

The lottery benefits China The lottery should be banned Winning the lottery should not change your behavior Lotteries contriute to corruption

I think, lotteries have many benefits in China.

Love does not always lead to happiness Do not make plans about love Without love you cannot be happy

Love is not easy, but difficult work. (Title: Love doesn't always lead to happiness)

Humans have made many species extinct Development is incompatible with environmentalism China has a responsiility to preserve species that may go extinct

During this time, humans have made many species extinct.

The final exam is a good test the final exam is a bad test Students learn more outside of class than in class Students are more important than teachers in making a class is successful

Students are more important than teachers in making a class successful.

College students who cohabitate get a better education Colleges should allow students to cohabitate on campus Colleges should make students promise not to cohabitate College students who cohabitate get a worse education

My hypothesis is that colleges should make students' promise not to cohabite because cohabitalion has more disadvantages than advantages.

The government should participate in research on stem cells Cloning technology is good for people. New laws for cloning are not needed. last sentence: So we believed that cloning techonology is good for people!

Buying on the internet will never be as popular as shopping in person People in China will take a long time to start internet shopping Internet shopping will reduce corruption

It will take a long time for Chinese people to start internet shopping.

The term Generation Gap is misleading The Generation gap in China is bigger than the generation gap in America Generation gaps have non-trivial effects

But people who advocate it, on the other hand, they feel there is uncomfortable " gap" between parents and teens. If so, they can do something to bridge it.

Yangmingyuan should not be restored Yangmingyuan should be restored for reasons other than tourism The French should pay for restoring Yangmingyuan

Should park stay in ruins? My answer is Yes.

The Chinese education system is more fair than the American system The Chinese education system is less fair than the American system The American education system is not appropriate for China The better education in an American school is worth the decreased safety

We can conclude that the American education system is not appropriate for China.

Televisions should be banned from the dining halls Children in homes without televisions are better-educated Children in homes without televisions are less culturally aware China should import American television programs

Some people say that with televisions children in homes will be better-educated. ... But I really cannot agree with them.

Professionals should learn to use crying during negotiations The government should launch a program to encourage crying Crying is a sign of weakness People who cry easily are at a disadvantage Even though crying can be healthy, it should be discouraged

I am sitting here, in the room 3108, engaged myself to solve this troublesome problem.that people are encouraged to cry or not.

It is fair to judge people by their clothing and appearance Cosmetic surgery is unfair and shoud be banned Cosmetic surgery should be paid for by the government Schools should teach how to maintain appearance

Schools should teach us how to maintain appearance .

Corruption is a useful part of the economy Laws against corruption are not very useful, even if enforced Corruption will decrease in the future in China even if it is not specifically combatted

And I believe the corruption will decrease in the future in China even if it is not specifically combatted.

Illegal drugs cause less problems than legal drugs China should ban alcohol and tobacco Drugs are primarily a political issue

But, drugs are primarily a political issue.

China should allow cloning even if other countries ban it All fetuses should undergo genetic testing Cloning humans is fundamentally different from cloning animals

Cloning humans is fundamentally different from cloning animals.

As a precursor to reunification, China should first treat Taiwan as an independent country China should not treat Taiwan as an independent country The KMT is not the best party in Taiwan to solve the Taiwan problem.

China should not treat Taiwan as an independent country.

The world would be better without cars China should ban private car ownership The United States should tax cars more Cars are better for society than bicycles

The world would be better without cars.

Taxes are the best way to reduce overpopulation The DINK family is a problem in society China's family planning policy should be made more strict Licenses should be required to have children

In my opinion, the Dink family is a problem in society.

Fuel Cell technology will not replace gasoline in the next 100 years China should begin deploying hydrogen-powered busses immediately America should spend more money on fuel cell technology then on wars in the Middle East Fuel Cell technology is not appropriate for China

Though Fuel Cell is a kind of technology to make our environment clean, it still will not replace gasoline in the next 100 years.

Because only women can have children, it is proper that, overall, women should work less than men Women should plan their careers and childbearing as early as possible China should pass more laws protecting child-bearing working women Society will never provide full equality for women Men must take more responsibility for raising children

It's really a time for men to take more responsibility for raising children.

China's entry into the WTO will unfairly harm some Chinese China's entry into the WTO will have more political than economic effects China's entry into the WTO will have more economic than political effects China should seek to change the WTO China's entry into the WTO is not the best way to improve the Chinese economy China's entry into the WTO is not as important as many people suggest

I think China's entry into the WTO is not the best way to improve the Chinese economy. (Title: China shouldn't enter the WTO)

China's support for the United States' war on terrorism is inconsistent China's support for the United States' war on terrorism is sincere The Chinese government's opinion of the United States' war on terrorism is not the same as the Chinese peoples' China's support for the United States' war on terrorism is unexpected China's support for the United States' war on terrorism is expected

China's support for the United States' war on terrorism is sincere.

Patriotism and nationalism are poorly defined words which should not be used Nationalists do not serve their country well Patriotism and nationalism should be encouraged China is more patriotic then the United States

To some extent, nationalists do not serve their country well as patriots do, though they think they love their country. They way of love for their country is not good.

Global economy and global culture cannot be separated The only way for a small country to preserve its culture is to remain economically isolated China should export Chinese culture like the United States exports American culture Globalization happens more in culture than in economics

Global economy and globale culture have strong influence over each other. They cannot be separated.

Water pollution is a bigger problem than air pollution China should follow Australia's lead and stop sea dumping Taxes should be raised around the world to protect water supplies

And now water pollution is a big problem around the world. What should we do to solve this problem.

China's support of America's war on terrorism is conditional China and the US should use the effects of the 11 Sep attacks to improve mutual ties The 11 Sep attacks should not affect China/US relations If terrorists attacked China in the same way as Sep 11, China's reaction would be similar

China and the US should use the effects of the events to improve mutual ties

Single-sex schools are a bad idea Single-sex schools are a good idea Co-educational schools should offer some single-sex courses Single-sex schools are better for girls than for boys

I propose to solve both problems at once by changing GUET in to a single-sex university.

Cloning is too complex a topic for meaningful public debate Cloning should be illegal Cloning should be legal Cloning is not a major development

Actually cloning is too complex a topic for meaningful public debate.

You should get rich before you marry Money is the biggest problem in relationships Money and love are equally important in happiness

In fact, money and love are equally important in happiness.

Sex education in China is more important now than in the past China should have more sex education China should not have more sex education

But now . with the process of urbanizing and improvement of people's quality, most people think China should have more sex education.

It is useful to record our dreams We should ignore our dreams Schools should have classes on dreams

School should have classes on dreams and tell student how to open these letters.

Crying is a sign of strength People who cry are more healthy Crying should remain socially unacceptable

But I insist that cry is natuer's way of making us feel more comfortable. People who cry are more healthy.

A diplomat who understands a culture's body language is more effective than a diplomat who understands the spoken language Non-verbal communication should be taught before foreign languages Language barriers are more cultural than linguistic

A diplomat who understands a culture's body language is more effective than a diplomat who understands the spoken language

China should adopt the United States' gun laws China's gun control is more effective than America's America's gun laws are adequate

Which country's gun control is more effective? Let's analyze it.

IQ is not a meaningful idea IQ can and should be influenced after birth Everyone should know their own IQ

I can announce that IQ can and should be influenced after birth.

Euthanasia can frequently be justified The legality of euthanasia should be decided by country Euthanasia is essentially the same thing as assisted suicide or mercy killing.

I think that euthanasia can frequently be justified.

Internet dating is a bad idea Internet dating is better than most other forms of dating Internet dating should only be a supplement to real-life dating

Though computers grab millions of people, their ability to connect people around the world is becoming a more, powerful fource, and more and more people start dating online, internet dating is still a bad idea.

Attractive people have easier lives than unattractive people College students should have image consultants Attractive people are better than unattractive people

I think attractive people have easier lives than unattractive people.

The world economy is unfair The WTO will make the world economy more fair The WTO will make the world economy less fair

WTO will make the world economy more fair.

It is not significant that a computer beat the world chess champion It is very significant that a computer beat the world chess champion It benefits humans to have computers that can replace human labor It does not, on the whole, benefit humans to have computers that can replace human labor There is no limit to the ability of computers to improve

I believe that computer and robots will replace humanity in doing many works. And it absolutely benefits human being.

China should address the AIDS epidemic in the same way Cuba has AIDS is not political topic People with HIV/AIDS are treated unfairly HIV is less important that other infectious diseases

The victims of HIV/AIDS should have been sympathized, but instead of that, they are hated to death by others. Can we call that's fairly treated?

China's economic reforms have essentially been successful China's economic reforms have been socially unjust China's economic reforms have been socially just

So far, China's economic reforms have essentially been successful.

Old marriage rituals are no longer relevant and should be abandoned Old traditions must be adapted to change or they will be lost Tourism is a force for cultural preservation

A fact that any foreigners come to a country is for its colorful culture, and tourism is a important force for cultural preservation.

China should adopt American standards on food safety American standards on food safety are not appropriate for China Food is second only to language as a part of culture

Because language can distinguish us from other animals, Food, as it goes along human being for thousands of years, is second only to language is a part of culture.

Part-time jobs should be required for high school students Students shouldn't get jobs before finishing high school Colleges should provide part-time jobs for students

Colleges should provide part-time jobs for students.

Only rich people can properly understand music The Industrial revolution was bad for music The Industrial revolution was good for music

And the Industrial Revolution was good for folk music.

Anyone who smokes is ignorant or foolish Smoking is social behavior Smoking is anti-social behavior Smoking is encouraged by governments who profit from the taxes

Smoking is a foolish behavior.

China is not doing enough to protect its environment Humans have always damaged their environments Species extinction is a normal process and should not be prevented

Humans have always damaged their environments.

People are inevitably judged by their clothing and appearance Attractive people are happier High schools should teach how to maintain appearance

From many aspects. We can see people are inevitably judged by their clothing and appearance.

It is a bad idea to give money to beggars Homelessness in China is different from in America We have greater responsibility to needy people in our own countries than in other countries

I think it's a bad idea to give money to beggars.

Access to guns is a minor factor in crime rates Gun control is not a useful idea Gun control is necessary

In fact, access to guns is not the main factor in crime rates.

People should be willing to change jobs frequently People should try not to change jobs frequently Quitting a job is primarily an emotional, not economic, decision

So people should try not to change jobs frequently.

Chinese schools should offer more art education Art classes should be required for all students Art classes are a waste of time for most students

Arts education is important for a person, it can help people a lot throught his/her whole life. (Title: Art classes should be required for all students)

College degrees should not be offered over the internet Teachers should get special training before teaching over the internet The internet can replace most traditional schools

And I think the Internet can replace most traditional schools.

China's entry into the WTO will be unfair to rural farmers Entry into the WTO will make Chinese farming more efficient After entering into the WTO, China will no longer be able to control its own agriculture policy

This topic said about the effection of China's entry the WTO to Chinese agriculture, it will be unfail to rural farmers.

There is nothing special we can do as individuals to prepare for terrorism Terrorism is a fact of life We should teach not teach our children about terrorism

But some people think that terrorism is a fact of life , even they thenk that it's a way to punish by God. In my opinion, although the terrorism incident on September 11th, 2001 is terrible, this idea above is more terrible.

Men are pigs University is a good place for students to learn about love Students should not date on campus

Though I agree with the wording, I am in favour of the latter view, students should not date on campus.

Laws about terrorism are inadequate Terrorism in Asia is the worst in the world Land mines are a form of terrorism

Are laws about terrorism adequate? I don't think so.

CLONAID is an organization of crazy people Cloning is against Confucian ideas Cloning is a religious issue

The human cloning company - CLONAIDTM is an organization of crazy people.

Abstinence-only is the best policy to teach teenagers in sex education Abstinence-only not a good policy to teach teenagers in sex education Sex education is a good idea Sex education is a bad idea

I take the position to agree with the majority, "Students should be taught about sex at school.

The DINK family should be encouraged It is abnormal for people to not want to have children Most people are unqualified to have children Having children is primarily an economic decision

In my opinion, the DINK family should be encouraged.

Students should be required to take part-time jobs for experience Colleges should provide part-time jobs for students who need them Students make poor employees

I think colleges should provide part-time jobs for students who need them and this can give more chances to college students to improve themselves.

Teachers must be trained before they can teach with computers All students must have computer classes Only senior middle school and college students need computer classes Colleges should require students to buy computers

Also, education is changing. A computerism system is used. (Title: All students must have computer classes.)

People can't really have close friends from other cultures People from different cultures are less likely to be closer friends Culture doesn't matter when making friends

People from different cultures are less likely to be closer friends, I think.

China will never allow gay marriages Chinese religions and beliefs, such as Confucianism, do not support homosexuality Chinese religions and beliefs, such as Confucianism, do not talk about homosexuality

But according to the situation of homosexuals in China and the Chinese culture, it seem impossible that China will allow gay marriages.

College morning exercise should remain mandatory College morning exercise should be reformed College morning exercise should be optional I hope the rules can be changed. College morning exercise should be optional.

Moral people are more likely to become rich Moral people are less likely to become rich Rich people are less likely to be moral

Whether moral people are more likely to become rich or not, this is a debatable topic for a long time.

It will be many more years before men and women are equal in the workplace Female college students need part-time jobs more than male college students Women need more help in the workplace

the fact behind the number is that women need more help in the workplace.

Chinese schools should teach more personal finance skills Personal finance skills are more necessary in China than in America Personal finance skills are less necessary in China than in America

People may ask why school should teach personal finance skills.

To be successful, most students require extra lessons outside of school Home schooling is not a good idea Education in America is racist

But some people think that home schooling is not a good idear.

College morning exercise should remain mandatory College morning exercise should be reformed College morning exercise should be optional

College morning exercise should be optional.

Human Cloning should be banned Human Cloning should be encouraged Cloning humans is immoral

As far as I'm concerned, I see no problems with human cloning and it should be encouraged instead of banned.

China should ban reproductive cloning even if other countries approve it Clones will be subject to prejudice, much as adopted children can be Cloning should be illegal until it is completely safe Cloning is a political issue Cloning should not be a political issue

But I think cloning should be banned, because it causes troubles in our society such as moral and ethical problems.

(Students who did not present adequate research by the deadline were given materials on a topic of my choice.)

Cheating in college leads to corruption after college. Student cheating in college is qualitatively different from corruption. Students have legitimate reasons to cheat

I propose to tell and solve both. Cheating in college and it leads to corruption after college.

Cheating in college leads to corruption after college. Student cheating in college is qualitatively different from corruption. Students have legitimate reasons to cheat

It is more serious that cheating in college leads to corruption after college.

Cheating in college leads to corruption after college. Student cheating in college is qualitatively different from corruption. Students have legitimate reasons to cheat

But I do hate the actions of cheating in colleges and corruptions in society.

Cheating in college leads to corruption after college. Student cheating in college is qualitatively different from corruption. Students have legitimate reasons to cheat

The corruption in social is qualitatively different from students cheating.

Cheating in college leads to corruption after college. Student cheating in college is qualitatively different from corruption. Students have legitimate reasons to cheat

Cheating in college leads to corruption after college.

Class Survey Results (89 answers. Average rank shown. Strongly agree: +2; Strongly disagree: -2)

Good:

I am learning how to think more clearly about English writing (1.2) This class was valuable for me (1.2) The final exam was fair. (1) The instructor was effective in teaching me (0.9) When I ask questions of the instructor the answers are helpful (0.8) I got my papers and homework back in a reasonable amount of time (0.8) The instructor is helpful when students are confused. (0.8) I learned about things I need to know (0.7) I understood the rules for the class (0.7) The instructor seems knowledgeable in many areas. (0.7) The instructor tells me when I do a very good job (0.6) I understood the materials I was being taught (0.5) Students volunteer their own opinions. (0.5) Students discuss each others' ideas (0.5)

(disagree) I cannot understand the instructor (-0.7) I often didn't pay attention in class (-0.9) I wish I could change to a different major (-0.9)

Neutral:

I learned more in this class than than in other classes (0.4) I learned about things I'm interested in (0.4) I wish more classes were like this (0.4) I am comfortable asking questions in this class (0.4) Classmates helped me learn (0.4) Students are willing to disagree with the instructor (0.3) I helped classmates learn (0.1) Class was too fast (-0.2)

Bad:

The instructor is too strict (0.5)

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